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An eye for an eye

--An eye for an eye--   
 
 
 Ian drove himself forward as fast as he dared go. The fire burning brightly behind him illuminated the thick woods around him and drove back the night. It was still dark and he knew he was being foolish to charge out into the woods for his vengeance at this hour. The logical voice in the back of his mind was urging him to rethink the suicide mission he'd embarked on, but that voice was just a whisper now.  
 
 Every time he'd argue himself into slowing down or retreating altogether he'd remember the bodies. The thing hadn't even fed on them it'd killed them for sport. It wa

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An eye for an eye--An eye for an eye--   
 
 
 Ian drove himself forward as fast as he dared go. The fire burning brightly behind him illuminated the thick woods around him and drove back the night. It was still dark and he knew he was being foolish to charge out into the woods for his vengeance at this hour. The logical voice in the back of his mind was urging him to rethink the suicide mission he'd embarked on, but that voice was just a whisper now.  
 
 Every time he'd argue himself into slowing down or retreating altogether he'd remember the bodies. The thing hadn't even fed on them it'd killed them for sport. It wa An eye for an eye
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Why?Thousands of guardians play in the sand,  Knowing not do they of the impending death,  But only of honor and glory to the victor,  Fighting for family, fighting for love,   
They are as sacrificial lambs, presented to the politician,  He says they will do their duty, that their country thanks them,  As many in that rank have, and will, the two face man lies,  With service and a smile, through his pearly whites flowed mistruths,  Rifles, planes, tanks, grenades, and people traverse the sea,  Awaiting the faithful day when a kill is theirs,  Then, and only then, will they come home,  W Why?
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Immortal Judgement - Chapter 9Chapter 9  The End of the Beginning   
Vincent breathed in and out quickly, his chest rising and falling rapidly, his breathing shallow, his lungs exhaling carbon dioxide just as suddenly as they inflated briefly with oxygen.  The doors to Claire’s home stared back at him, standing before him with ominous symbolism.  He felt a chill run down the length of his spine, tingling every nerve, sending it spiraling like an electric signal on a copper line throughout his entire body.  He felt his muscles grow tense and lock up.  Suddenly, his mind blacked out and replayed the entire night in Immortal Judgement - Chapter 9
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Journal Entry: Mon Aug 20, 2007, 3:31 AM
I'm off to the beach for a few days! Three to be exact! So if you submit a deviation and I don't respond to it for a while thats probably why! I'm hoping to start writing more soon and actually submitting things again. I just don't want to write anything until I have something really good in my head. Hopefully that will happen soon.

Have a good few days boys and girls

--Obale

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  • Current Age: 21
  • Interests: Writing, playing the guitar, and a smattering of other things
  • Favourite movie: Boondock Saints
  • Favourite band or musician: To many to list but heres trying: Louis Armstrong, Greenday, NOFX, Frank Sinatra, and many more
  • Favourite genre of music: Awesome
  • MP3 player of choice: Don't really care so long as it plays
  • Shell of choice: Turtle?
  • Skin of choice: uh... mine?
  • Favourite game: hmmm...
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: Morbo
  • Tools of the Trade: Brain

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=WolfSongMountain:iconWolfSongMountain: Apr 8, 2008, 2:47:43 AM
Hey Obale :typerhappy:
Just thought i'd check up on ya since i havent heard from you in like ages :D So...how you been?

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I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less i like.
Is it over yet, In my head?
I know nothing of your kind, and won't reveal your evil mind.
is it over yet? I can't win.
~Jadejealousy:iconJadejealousy: Jul 19, 2007, 5:06:32 AM
Hey thank you for the fav on Revealing scars from the past =]

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So I took this pillowcase to clean, the m e s s I have made of someone elses d r e a m...
~Jadejealousy:iconJadejealousy: Jul 19, 2007, 3:19:55 AM
Heyy bahaha yeah they are power lines in my photo xD

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So I took this pillowcase to clean, the m e s s I have made of someone elses d r e a m...
~Obale:iconObale: Jul 18, 2007, 3:32:43 AM
anytime, it was good. Sorry you felt that way though. It's the worst.
~Obale:iconObale: Jul 18, 2007, 3:32:01 AM
Your sweet! Thanks!!
~Jadejealousy:iconJadejealousy: Jul 18, 2007, 3:29:48 AM
Hey thanks for the comment on darkest desires, aand yeah- that's exactly how I felt when I was writing it

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~GirlyGarlic:iconGirlyGarlic: Jul 18, 2007, 3:29:10 AM Mood: Sentimental
You're such a good writer. :love:
~Obale:iconObale: Jun 28, 2007, 12:48:52 AM
Your welcome, and thanks you too!
~Obale:iconObale: Jun 28, 2007, 12:41:51 AM
oh yeah that helps. You just can't do anything completely nude or really sexual (like that could be considered porn)
~ablindoutline:iconablindoutline: Jun 25, 2007, 4:32:26 AM
hey man. thanks for the good feedback..hope you're doing well!
~ffacowgirl22:iconffacowgirl22: Jun 25, 2007, 4:22:26 AM
Thanks for the tip but i put them down as mature dose that do anything?
~akimarose:iconakimarose: Jun 23, 2007, 1:59:56 AM
Thanks for the comments and the fave
and everything.
Me like :)
~ShadowWolf471:iconShadowWolf471: Jun 16, 2007, 11:10:02 PM
Hey, Chapter 8 is up. Lemme know what you think!

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"The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become."
~Obale:iconObale: May 28, 2007, 10:05:52 PM
anytime. I liked it!
~OminousandOmnipotent:iconOminousandOmnipotent: May 28, 2007, 6:12:05 PM
hey hey, thankee sai for the :+fav: :D

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The dead don't say no. :tombstone:
~OminousandOmnipotent
My lamb, my martyr, my god
~Seven7Stitches
~Obale:iconObale: May 24, 2007, 3:46:10 AM
Thanks. I've not been writing long this is the first thing I've actually written for recreation so don't be surprised if its not very good. I'm actually thinking of writing some other stuff (zombies have been done to death) but whatever I make I'll be putting on here. Coming up with something original seems to be the most difficult part.

Oh and I've been reading your story I'll comment on each chapter as I do. Its interesting to see another persons story as they write it. (as opposed to going to the library and getting a published book)
~ShadowWolf471:iconShadowWolf471: May 23, 2007, 4:46:36 PM
Hey, thanks for the comment on my story. I hope you enjoy it further and I look forward to any feedback you might have. I briefly looked over your writing and it looks interesting, I shall read it more in depth when I get the chance!

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"The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become."
~serenapitre:iconserenapitre: May 20, 2007, 12:17:53 PM
Thanks For The Watch! :hug:

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